By: Hoffinator

Hoffinator — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 12:06:59 +0000

Tie it back to the fact that the mindset of an entrepreneur would not allow you to give up so easily. Also, just a side note, try to take out some of the instances of the word "business" in the beginning. It's a little overwhelming.
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By: Hee Yang H

Hee Yang H — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 11:39:59 +0000

Something like the lost that you have gotten is little compared to some other people who has fallen pray to such pay pal scam. Surely it is "worthwhile" but it all possible to have prevented all these if you had researched on such scam etcs. So these can be a good learning point if you further into other buisnesses as well. You have to be 100% sure of the pros and cons and other condition to have a good idea of how your buisness will turn out, seek for a second opinion then move on. As every idea you have into a buisness would be some way or another a bias one. Its mostly on your own preferances and level of thinking. This is what i have been told from young. I'm soon gonna start my own online business. Hope all the best for your future development! Take Care!
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